wow I got lost in that last convo! but I think I am back on track now.
I talked to my teacher, And he thinks that I should just leave his name Valor, sorry no offense, but because he is a teacher I am going to go with his Idea.
But from now on when I have and idea i will ask you'nze first then present the idea to him.
So on that note... My teacher also said that it would be neat to add illustrations and then something about a puzzle. And that would go with the Mystery part. What If I had different pictures at the beginning of each chapter, and then towards the end, those get put together as a map(in the sense of a puzzle) to show their destination or something?
Too cheesy?
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