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wrote:Lynn hoped that this discussion won't end in violence...
"wouldn't end in violence..."
wrote:"From things you will scarcly comprehend."
"scarcely comprehend."
wrote:Okay, thought lynn, he not only broke into my house, but also happens to be insane.
"Lynn".

Nanana... -wanders off-




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Post Higher Spirit
I provide the the creativity. Word Provides the grammar. Simple arrangement.
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Unfortunately, Word doesn't always catch the things that don't make sense. xD

You can't rely on Word too much, sorreh, Post.

Unless you want to make odd mistakes. For example, Word probably wouldn't stop you from inserting "the" instead of "they" and "and" instead of "an". Which is why you need to do some re-reading.


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wrote:You can't rely on Word too much, sorreh, Post.
"Sorry"
wrote:Unless you want to make odd mistakes. For example, Word probably wouldn't stop you from inserting "the" instead of "they" and "and" instead of "an". Which is why you need to do some re-reading.
I so does.
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...I did that "sorreh" on purpose. :magic:


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Hah! Brazen lies!
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-raises her eyebrows- I have nothing to say, only that I speak the truth. Do you think I would embarrass myself on a story thread where I'm supposed to be a reviewer?


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wrote:raises her eyebrows-
Just when I thought I had pinned down the gender...
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Adele Djinni
You still didn't answer me, What name should I use? .... why don't you'nz write your own book, you seem to be pretty good writers. Oh yeah, When I rewrote it, I did have Lynn tell Valor that he was insane and a mental institution would do him good, so she doesn't beleive him that easily, until he answers random questions that only she would know the answers to. And his knowledge gives her reason to beleive him.
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wrote:"You know me from your school, as Archie Andrews (Or whatever), Let us leave it at that."
He doesn't tell her. Bit more mystery.
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Adele Djinni
Yeah but then she would be more skeptical of him, and they would never start their adventure. So If I did do that, how would I convince Lynn to trust him or whatever?
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Saves a couple of times from death. Starts a cynical/trusting relationship.
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Adele Djinni
Ok I follow ya! but How do I tie it in to what I already have?
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...Think of a plot twist that allows some action in. Or something. Just make it interesting, but not too complicated to follow.

Okay, whatever. Just think. XD

...A negative to the "writing material fit to be published" comment, I am working on some stories, but I really doubt I'll ever finish anything at all, unless the said story is a one-shot. :ninja4:


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wrote:Just when I thought I had pinned down the gender...
Alchemist?
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..I am a girl, Post. A femme, female, fae. ...Yeah...


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Post Higher Spirit
We are hopelessly out numbered. Next, you will become a dracomione supporter.
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-shrugs- I'm not on the side of any shipping, either way. Only the absolutely confirmed ones... When the books are published and I've read them. xD


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Shipping must be exterminated.
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...Lmao, Post. Okay, get this: I don't actively partake in shipping. X.x


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