Nero, it will take some time to continue sending reviews as I have decided to start reading it all over again. Bear with me until then.

Allright then. I understand.

At last, I got the time to read your story! I tried to, during the past 2 days, but between my cousins & exams, I had absolutely no time. Anyway, the 6th chap was very nice. Nero knowing Ptolemy was quite a shock. The last line in the 2nd para is grammatically wrong. Also, bored was written as board. What I like best about your story is its originality & simplicity. Though the basic idea is borrowed from JS, the ideas are amusing & very different. Good work. Have you written only 8 chaps?

Yeah, and I've barely started the ninth. I'll continue it though.
And where does it say he knew Ptolemy? Sorry, it's been a while since I've read even my own story. :D

Told you: Oneshots are infinitely better.

I am now officially revamping it. I have realized how much it sucks.

Really:

The plot is wonky

Characters aren't in....well character. (Like Barty)

And my style has completely changed since the last time I posted a chapter. Thus....

A new one shall be out by the end of the year....at least that's what I'm hoping.