I read it and
OH GOD SPARE ME!!!!!
I dis agree with the fact that they called Hr a drama queen. She spends way too much time in the library to be one. The punch was just a one-time thing.
And honestly, it seems to me that all Draco needs is understanding. Especially, in book 6, he seems to be under a lot of stress. And it says in the essay that she releases her emotions on him. That's not really healthy in a relationship.
And when he warns them about the Death Eaters in book 6, it's not out of any special concern for Hr. Draco was just bragging about how powerful his parents and friends are. He would probably have wanted to see her suffer.
After years of bieng put-down by his father because she was smarter, I don't think he would actually care for her. If I was in his position, I would probably resent/hate her more for that.
And by the end, Draco grows up beyond name-calling. I'm also pretty sure his father told him that it wouldn't look good. Name-calling is petty, and I'm sure Draco could do a lot better (or worse depending on how you see it)
And fanfiction means nothing.
Sorry, I had to rant. I can't stand D/HR
