The Sequel To The Badly Named Trilogy

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Count Mite
Disclaimer: I do not own the Bartimaeus Trilogy, its settings, character, etc, etc, etc, etc, i'm doing this for the lawyers , etc, etc

So, without further ado...

Kitty stood at the pentacle, sweating slightly. Her throat was parched, but she was determined. This was the moment… Slowly and carefully, she started the incantation to summon djinn…

*

After the… the incident, she had got an award and a whole load of cash from the new Government. They were willing to even install a statue of her next to Gladstone and… she refused to speak his name. How could he even think of going back on his promise the way he did!

Hoping a journey would calm her and help her overcome… his death, she had voyaged around the world. Ah, the wonders she had seen! The Leaning Tower, the Colosseum, the Eiffel tower, the Statue of Liberty, the Taj Mahal, the Great Wall and… Egypt. But she could never get over the feeling that some part of her was missing, and everywhere she went, she imagined him commenting on everything…

Bartimaeus too. When she stood near the Pyramids, she imagined Bartimaeus overseeing the imps, never doing the dirty work himself… It almost brought a smile to her face. The Sphinx looked ahead, with her broken nose and calm look on her face…

She had looked for any loophole, researched through the vast libraries of Alexandria, met the great magicians of the past… questioned the fakirs of India and the descendants of the Shamans of America, but there was no way for him to be alive.

“The release of such potent power would have definitely destroyed any human who was near,” they said. “Any djinn would have died as well.”

There was only one hope- he had dismissed Bartimaeus. Then, at least Bartimaeus would have lived… She would have never expected it of Mandrake, but the last time she had seen, there was some grudging respect between them.

And so she had decided. She would try to summon Bartimaeus. She had tried three months back, but he had not come. The sadness that enveloped her allowed no place for thought, but then she reached for that faint glimmer of hope- Bartimaeus might have been summoned by a different magician.

*

After she spoke the final incantation and counted the seconds it would take, she braced herself for the worst. But something was definitely happening! The wind in the middle of the pentacle swirled round and round, slow at first, but then like a tornado, odious smells were emitted, and in a flash of light she saw an Egyptian boy standing. His mouth widened in surprise, as Kitty said “Hi, Bartimaeus”


Not bad, are you going to ad more or is that going to be it?
I am Djinni hear me Roar!!!!
mr.guy Mite
Bartifan12 wrote:Not bad, are you going to ad more or is that going to be it?
yes, are you putting anything else?

it's not too bad. not enough to really tell though for me
mr.guy wrote:
Bartifan12 wrote:Not bad, are you going to ad more or is that going to be it?
yes, are you putting anything else?

it's not too bad. not enough to really tell though for me
Oh cool. The part were she summoned Bart was good with details and descriptions "The wind in the pentical swirled round, and round, slowly at first then like a tornado, odios smells were emitted" for example.
I am Djinni hear me Roar!!!!
ur going to continue this, ryt? ryt?
That's relly good! But I hoped u had shown Bartimaeus appear in Nathaniel's form. He has taken Ptolemy's form way too many times. And PLEASE do continue.
"If the bee disappears from the surface of the earth, man would have no more than four years to live. No more bees, no more pollination ... no more men!" - Einstein
"I like quoting Einstein. Know why? Because nobody dares contradict you." - Studs Terkel.
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nathanielandbartimaeus wrote: That's relly good! But I hoped u had shown Bartimaeus appear in Nathaniel's form. He has taken Ptolemy's form way too many times. And PLEASE do continue.
yeah! kitty would be surprised. :P

at least i thought so.

Btw, are you continuoing it?
Count has disappeared from the screen. :o :no: :( :cry:
"If the bee disappears from the surface of the earth, man would have no more than four years to live. No more bees, no more pollination ... no more men!" - Einstein
"I like quoting Einstein. Know why? Because nobody dares contradict you." - Studs Terkel.
<@Ximenez> Sentynel: But i have a life? No. Qed.
Look, Count, If you don't finish this than Tchue the Great will rent you twain, and then finish this himself.
I am Tchue, I have razed citys with a single word, rent twain marids with wit alone. I am Tchue, deadier with words and wit than with Detonations and Spasms.
TchueTheBladeTonguedAfrit wrote: Look, Count, If you don't finish this than Tchue the Great will rent you twain, and then finish this himself.
Count would be seriously scared now.
"If the bee disappears from the surface of the earth, man would have no more than four years to live. No more bees, no more pollination ... no more men!" - Einstein
"I like quoting Einstein. Know why? Because nobody dares contradict you." - Studs Terkel.
<@Ximenez> Sentynel: But i have a life? No. Qed.
I am serious count. I am waiting 24 hours for a progress report. If none are found........................
I am Tchue, I have razed citys with a single word, rent twain marids with wit alone. I am Tchue, deadier with words and wit than with Detonations and Spasms.
I'm sorry count but it looks like I'm going to have to do ch2. Any objections? tell me after the chapter

I do not own the Bartimaeus Trilogy or any other related articles, blah, blah, blah

Ch2- Bartimaeus Returns

I swirled in with my usual grace, first as a swirling pillar of sand before materializing as Ptlomey. I opened my eyes to a slight feminine figure. No prizes for guessing who.

"Kitty"
"Bartimaeus"

Kitty uttered a quick command and a quick hand gesture. The pentacle faded into nothing and she stepped forward and embraced Ptlomey's form. He smelled of damp sand, and papayrus of Ancient Egypt. After what seemed like an enternity, Kitty stepped back.
"Bartimaeus where were you last month. I tried to summon you, but the pentacle stayed quiet"
I hesitated slightly
"Bartimaeus come on! Tell me!"
She steeled herself for every out come, but his answer, when it came, came as a profound shock.
"I was with....... Nathaniel"
"Nat? but how. The Glass Palace was in ruins! I saw it! There was nothing there!"
Bartimaeus sat down on the hardwood floor as he did so he observed the room
"Nice place you got here. By the way where are we?"
"We're in a London town house. It was my old house before I participated in the resistance. My parents had immigrated to Italy after the "Demon Rebellion" as they call it."
I was lost in thought for a second, before asking a crucial question.
"How's the Government?"
I could tell by her face that the following news wasn't good
"The Council's seven seats are occupid by 3 commoners, one 2nd level magicain called Ms Piper, and 2 magicains from the Americain campaings whom are of the 7th level. The current Prime Minister is......... Jane Farrar" She finished off with a grimace.
I flew outside as a sparrow for a quick peek. I was mildly impressed. In only 2 years they had patched up everything afflicted by Nouda's rampage. I sighed. The British empire would last a while yet.

I alighted back in and shifted into Ptlomey's form once again.
" Oh and to answer your earlier question abour Nat, He is currently in Athens right now. When he broke thew staff, the spirts were so grateful to be relased that they whisked him off to Westminister abbey, which was the place thay had spent the most time in, and from there he traveled by plane to Athens. I wonder when He'll be back?"
"How about right now?"
Kitty whired around, and there, in the doorframe, hair as wild as ever, was Nathaniel
I am Tchue, I have razed citys with a single word, rent twain marids with wit alone. I am Tchue, deadier with words and wit than with Detonations and Spasms.
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Sorry, but I don't think that although Count hasn't replied, that you should continue with it. And you need to revise a bit more, as there are many grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. And I don't think that the plot is exactly going as Count planned...It seems he just wanted it to end there.
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Yes, i agree. Continue Count. I like it coz it speaks the impossible. Carry on.
"If the bee disappears from the surface of the earth, man would have no more than four years to live. No more bees, no more pollination ... no more men!" - Einstein
"I like quoting Einstein. Know why? Because nobody dares contradict you." - Studs Terkel.
<@Ximenez> Sentynel: But i have a life? No. Qed.
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Uh...I believe I didn't want him to continue.
No offense, Tchue, but I doubt I would be nice to continue a fanfiction without a reply.
I know but I barely have any patience and count hasn't been active for god knows how long, and the fanfic is just an example. The plot is all mine unfortunately but still I like the Idea and am just continuing it.
I am Tchue, I have razed citys with a single word, rent twain marids with wit alone. I am Tchue, deadier with words and wit than with Detonations and Spasms.
I don't think Count would be angry if he/she saw it. He/she can continue his/her story & Tchue can continue his.
"If the bee disappears from the surface of the earth, man would have no more than four years to live. No more bees, no more pollination ... no more men!" - Einstein
"I like quoting Einstein. Know why? Because nobody dares contradict you." - Studs Terkel.
<@Ximenez> Sentynel: But i have a life? No. Qed.
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99.5% are never completed.
Shame of the Super Son
Does anyone have any objections with me continueing MY fanfic?
I am Tchue, I have razed citys with a single word, rent twain marids with wit alone. I am Tchue, deadier with words and wit than with Detonations and Spasms.

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