First off, if you haven't read the Chapter 1 Sneak Peak , this could be considered a spoiler.

So, here it is. Female Barti. I know, Bartimaeus can transform into anything he wishes, but this one just blew my mind.



It's just a stupid sketch, and I fail at shading. But I'm proud of her hair and face.

Solomon was before Ptolemy, so, why the Ankh? Because I love it.

What about the ears? And where is the scaly tail? Well, I didn't feel like drawing a scaly tail. So, instead, I drew a fox tail. And it felt weird without the ears.

What's up with the claw? Well, his/her/its left foot can't be seen from that angle, now can it? Therefore, I decided to draw her/his/its right hand as a claw, so that it could be seen.

Hehe. I like the reasons you gave for drawing it as you did.
The face and the hair is pretty indeed. The other parts are weird xD.

Oh, geez. Sorry, I was sick. So the proportions seemed alright to me. lol.

EDIT, EDIT, EDIT!!



Bigger Ankh. Dress Edit. Body Edit -Hips still to small, sorry. Larger Breasts -why? Well, if an old one-eyed magician could notice the jiggling, they wouln't be small, would they?

Expression change. "Sure you dance well, Bartimaeus". She-is-not-happy.

I removed the ears because I love her hair too much. Therefore, I had to remove the fox tail. I replaced it with something that could resemble a scaly tail. Hmph.

I added a flame! -yes, that is a flame.

Stupid scanner. Shading was too soft I guess.

Fail. But, still, I love the hair and face even more.

Yeah, it looks better =D.
The tail looks more funny this time around though.

haha, everyones a critic :P

i think it looks great, i like the expression and the tail doesn't look weird :D

and could you tell me how you put images in the post like you do rather than having a link...

indie2 wrote:and could you tell me how you put images in the post like you do rather than having a link...

There is an 'Image' option. Click that. Paste the URL of the the page in which you saved that image (you can upload it on imageshack and give that link). Click 'okay'. You get a link on the page. When you post your reply, it gets displayed as an image.

nathanielandbartimaeus wrote:

indie2 wrote:and could you tell me how you put images in the post like you do rather than having a link...

There is an 'Image' option. Click that. Paste the URL of the the page in which you saved that image (you can upload it on imageshack and give that link). Click 'okay'. You get a link on the page. When you post your reply, it gets displayed as an image.

damn, i was hoping you could post directly on the site. can you use livejournal?

I suppose you can. I don't see why not.
But it is like posting it directly, right? I mean, how much more direct? If you are talking about a drawing you did, you just have to scan it and upload it in imageshack or something. You can't copy the image just like that, like how you do in Word. All forums are like that, I reckon.

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Edit - Oh, and let someone else answer too. I'm never 100% sure of anything when it comes to computers.

You need to host the image externally yes, http://imageshack.us is a good website.

ah, OK then. thank you :wub: