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These poor orphan fics have nowhere else to go! They've been laying around my harddrive for who knows how long a time! And since I'm banned from the place I used to post them, I'm going to put them here! Be Happy!
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Breathe

Hatred. Akanon sprinted down the street and breathed hatred. He fired his bolter one-handed at the Salamanders' green forms mixed in with the skittering human ants, and his soul screamed its spite. He threw back his arms and shrieked in keening falsetto. It felt good.

The scum were firing at him, now; he reveled in the sensation of their weapon hits. He stood still, basking in the glow of their hate and fear as the bolter fire shuddered against his armor. Then he hated, again. He fired his bolter in an unending stream of fire and death until the weapon ran out and he hurled the empty weapon down the ruined street. It might have caved in someone's skull, he didn't bother to look. He ripped a street lamp from its base, then rammed it through a Guardsman's groin. He vaguely remembered that was supposed to be painful –and maybe it was, but the human died too quickly. He sneered.

He found a Guardsman cowering in a hole, he pulled it out and jabbed his thumbs through its eyes. He could have popped the skull like a grape, but his way was more fun. The spasmodic dance it made under his hands amused him.

It felt close and clammy all of a sudden, so he tore off his horned helm and sucked the air greedily. He hit something with the helmet –it dropped. The Salamanders were shooting at him again, trying to hit his exposed face. The bolts bounced off the adamantium scales growing up from his ears. He grinned at their impotence.

He felt like screaming again, so he picked up another Guardsman and screamed. The human maggot pissed himself. Its fear was so delicious that Akanon half closed his eyes in ecstasy. He licked the human. Then he bit out its throat. He was going to eat some more, but a Salamander killed the soldier before he had the chance. That made him angry. He was very angry. He charged the nearest Salamander. It had a flamer. Akanon stuck out his tongue to taste the promethium burn. He pounded the green helmet into the rockcrete, again, three times, four, he lost count. Eventually he gave up and just blew up the promethium tanks.

A human was fleeing. It was a female with her young. He picked her up by the ankles and smashed her head into paste on the rockcrete. He decided to let the baby die on its own.

There were those Space Marines again, withdrawing in close order formation. Akanon remembered when he used to do that. He hated it. He despised formations. He despised them for making him remember about formations. He bellowed like a bull and charged them with his chain-axe. He didn't bother with the chain-axe unless he felt the red hate on him. As the talons of a God, he didn't need weapons –they just made the killing faster. He struck down on the first Salamander he could reach, but the scum was expecting it. So he threw the chain-axe and split the helmet of one the wasn't expecting it. Then he tore the bolter from the hands of the first Marine and blew his legs off. He blasted the head off a third, and the fourth... he wedged the muzzle of the bolter down the throat of the fourth so he could get a clean shot at the hearts. Not that it mattered, because he didn't bother aiming.

Blood. He needed blood. He found a human, reached into its belly and tore out its insides. He stood under the shower of blood and the welter of organs, rolled his face in it. The smell was so thick that he could taste the metallic tang without opening his mouth. Slick dangling things clung to his armor, caught on its spikes and washed in red. This pleased him. He threw away the shaking corpse. He needed more, but there was no one at hand. He tore the head off a dog, but it wasn't the same. He went back for that baby.

The baby wasn't there. Everywhere he looked, everyone was dead. He threw back his head and screamed his hate to the Blood God. The killing had only begun, the blood was not enough, he demanded more. Then a rocket blew his body in half.

A Space Marine rocket. A Salamander rocket. The Marine in green stood in a darkened window with a tube on his shoulder. Akanon's hatred and fury were so perfect that his lips peeled back in a rictus grin. His legs stood in front of him, upright. He saw more of the cowards line up in windows with bolters and plasma rifles. He seized one of his legs and poured out the coagulating blood over his face. It wasn't the same. In his last seconds, through his bared teeth he breathed hatred.
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Banned? Interesting, your profile is still up. And you still have your fanfics and favs (including My Immortal :D) on there.

Do your PMs work?
流口水的婊子和猴子的笨儿子。
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No, not Fanfiction.net. I doubt it accepts Warhammer 40K anyhow. I meant Relic Boards.


Meh. Sentynel? Ruberchicken? Anyone deign to comment on the fic?
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Burn the heretic!


Second one was creepy. You're screwed up. :P Good work.
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Nero Higher Spirit
Nice. But I find your style original. Never quite seen it before.
Wait...Dennis Foon...
Edit: You did "My Immortal"?
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...I should Castrate you for the very notion.

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/812267/Angst_Equinox (Heh. First result on Google.)

Mwamba hacked my account, Haven't gotten upto to cleaning it up yet.
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Nero wrote: Nice. But I find your style original. Never quite seen it before.
Wait...Dennis Foon...
Edit: You did "My Immortal"?
You've heard about it? *squee*

8885 reviews and still rising! :D

But she's dead.

Edit: Check out the favorite authors too. Scarlet sparx kicks AS/S. (She's the reason I converted to Dramione three years ago; but she's dead too.)

Why must everybody grow up? :cry:
流口水的婊子和猴子的笨儿子。
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Nero Higher Spirit
Kinda difficult not to notice it...for one, its actually on Wikipedia. Heh.
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wrote:Why must everybody grow up?
...Because FF.net sucks?
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I really love Warhammer (as you can see from my signature). First time I've seen a fanfiction for it. Good job. :dance: :dance: :gladstone: :gladstone:
In the grim darkness of the far future, there is only war.

-Warhammer 40000


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C0rm0c0dran wrote: I really love Warhammer (as you can see from my signature). First time I've seen a fanfiction for it. Good job. :dance: :dance: :gladstone: :gladstone:
;)

http://www.incunabulum.co.uk/

The man is my god.
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Cool. I really liked "Message in a bottle". Obviosly a C'tan. Probably The Dragon (the end gives it away). NECRONS FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (I collect them) :locked: :locked: :locked: :locked: :locked:
In the grim darkness of the far future, there is only war.

-Warhammer 40000


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Apollo Marid
I hope that the second one was just a phase.

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