Bartimaeus Sequence Fan Forum

My ff

14 Jan 07 - 20:58

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2851445/1/

enough said. My first one but don't go easy on the crticism.

Gladstone:you cannot fight against the future. Time is on our side.

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http://movies.lionhead.com/studio/Variq

5 Aug 08 - 19:07

I like the writing and the storyline, but it needs a bit of copy-editing for grammar. The run-on sentences bugged me particularly.

"For instance, there's probably something invisible with lots of tentacles hovering behind your back right NOW."- Dear Old Barti, of course