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The Ultimate Evil; Mary-Sues!
Topic Started: Feb 18 2007, 10:20 PM (3,871 Views)
Artemis Feb 18 2007, 10:20 PM Post #1
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 Woo-hoo! I wrote a story! Yay! *Jubulation is now over.*

This new story includes all of you! I hope you don't mind. If you do, let me know. Basically what happens is, because of my folly we end up transported into the world of "My Immortal" and must escape before we are transformed into Sues.

Lame I know, but I'm just having fun. I'll post the first chapter here, but for the rest you'll have to go to my ff account. I stull need to upload the story so I'll post the Link later.

The reason the tenses switch is because in Tara's story Ebony speaks in first person. (Even though it isn't present tense.) If you have any suggestions, requests, or are upset with something, let me know.
I say night I'm living in the forest of my dream,
I know the night is not as it would seem,
I must believe in something,
So I'll make myself believe it,
That this night will never go.


Laura Branigan, Self-control

:mouth: Oh, Canada...
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Sentynel Feb 18 2007, 10:25 PM Post #2
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Nothing But The Rain

 I thought I'd escaped for a moment then.

Then I realised you just can't spell.
Sentynel - Head Ninja, Admin, Keeper of the Ban Afrit, Official Forum Graphics Guy, I love Jen, and forum code debugger.
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Mwamba Feb 18 2007, 10:29 PM Post #3
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 :lol:

That was pretty good.
Washington is Hollywood for ugly people.

Miracles are like pimples, because once you start looking for them you find more than you'd ever dream you see.
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Artemis Feb 18 2007, 10:51 PM Post #4
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 Sorry Sent. I keep forgetting that it's "e" and not "a".

Thnx Mwamba, r and r on FF.net as well, please. It heightens my self-esteem.

EDIT: Sent is right, I can't seem to spell anything properly today.
I say night I'm living in the forest of my dream,
I know the night is not as it would seem,
I must believe in something,
So I'll make myself believe it,
That this night will never go.


Laura Branigan, Self-control

:mouth: Oh, Canada...
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Ianna Feb 18 2007, 11:04 PM Post #5
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 Wow.

You nailed that one part of me.

Like, seriously.

"You belong in Gryffindor,
where dwell the brave at heart,
Their daring, nerve and chivalry
set Gryffindors apart."
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Artemis Feb 18 2007, 11:07 PM Post #6
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 Are you being serious or sarcastic?

Most likely sarcastic.

More than most likely.

Which part?
I say night I'm living in the forest of my dream,
I know the night is not as it would seem,
I must believe in something,
So I'll make myself believe it,
That this night will never go.


Laura Branigan, Self-control

:mouth: Oh, Canada...
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Ianna Feb 18 2007, 11:07 PM Post #7
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 No serious.

That one part where I posted.

"You belong in Gryffindor,
where dwell the brave at heart,
Their daring, nerve and chivalry
set Gryffindors apart."
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Artemis Feb 18 2007, 11:09 PM Post #8
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 You're serious?

I was just trying to make the posts sound (look) realistic.
I say night I'm living in the forest of my dream,
I know the night is not as it would seem,
I must believe in something,
So I'll make myself believe it,
That this night will never go.


Laura Branigan, Self-control

:mouth: Oh, Canada...
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Ianna Feb 18 2007, 11:10 PM Post #9
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 Yes.

I dropped my water, actually.

"You belong in Gryffindor,
where dwell the brave at heart,
Their daring, nerve and chivalry
set Gryffindors apart."
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Artemis Feb 18 2007, 11:12 PM Post #10
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 Dropped your water?

Huh? I'm confused...
I say night I'm living in the forest of my dream,
I know the night is not as it would seem,
I must believe in something,
So I'll make myself believe it,
That this night will never go.


Laura Branigan, Self-control

:mouth: Oh, Canada...
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Mwamba Feb 18 2007, 11:14 PM Post #11
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 Ebony's going to hate me. I'm a semi prep. :cry:
Washington is Hollywood for ugly people.

Miracles are like pimples, because once you start looking for them you find more than you'd ever dream you see.
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Luciene Feb 18 2007, 11:15 PM Post #12
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 :cry:

Where's Stroud?

^Most important ONLY member

I miss him already
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Ianna Feb 18 2007, 11:17 PM Post #13
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 I was drinking out of a water bottle.

The carpet is now wet.

"You belong in Gryffindor,
where dwell the brave at heart,
Their daring, nerve and chivalry
set Gryffindors apart."
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Artemis Feb 18 2007, 11:18 PM Post #14
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 I'm too kind to subject him to that.

I hope your carpet's all right.

Don't worry Mwamba, Arti's got her bag of cosmetics, remember? Ebony will never know your true nature... :D
I say night I'm living in the forest of my dream,
I know the night is not as it would seem,
I must believe in something,
So I'll make myself believe it,
That this night will never go.


Laura Branigan, Self-control

:mouth: Oh, Canada...
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Ianna Feb 18 2007, 11:20 PM Post #15
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 Don't worry, I'm in the process of cleaning it up.

Meaning it'll be dry by tomorrow.

"You belong in Gryffindor,
where dwell the brave at heart,
Their daring, nerve and chivalry
set Gryffindors apart."
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